Re: [More-than-a-BSP] Announcement Review

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Author: intrigeri
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To: more-than-a-bsp
Subject: Re: [More-than-a-BSP] Announcement Review
Hi,

isydor:
> I'm replying only to a subset of questions.


Thanks!

> intrigeri:
> The announcement is great :)


:)

>> If we want to make "Goals and principles" even shorter, we could:
>>
>>  * Drop "Dinner will be self-organized once we are there". It doesn't
>>    provide substantially more actionable info than not saying anything
>>    about dinner at all.


> It provides an information that is otherwise not present I think: the
> MtaBSP can last until or even after dinner.


Well, actually, I doubt we can stay after dinner (we've not booked the
place for evenings). So if this piece of text suggests we can, that's
one more reason to drop it IMO :)

>>  * Drop "In other words: if you're part of a group that is currently
>>    under-represented in computer communities, we would like you to be
>>    able to attend" (which is essentially a rephrasing of the previous
>>    two sentences.)


> I had difficulties to understand this sentence and could not find a way
> to rephrase it properly. I find it useful too, so I would keep it.


Just to be clear: you find it difficult to understand but would rather
keep it anyway? (I have no strong opinion myself.)

Cheers,
--
intrigeri