Re: [Tails-ux] greeter UX: advanced options

Hi,

Just some remarks on phrasing from my side:

=> Spoof all MAC adresses - the description sentence should be
simplified. You can't explain "spoof" by "spoof" i think. My idea would
be something like:

* "Conceal the hardware identifier of your network card"
* "Conceal the unique hardware identifier of your network card"
* "Conceal the identifiable hardware identifier of your network card"

=> "Persistent volume lets you save data and configuration." I'd write:
Persistent volume lets you save data and configuration files.

Cheers!
u.